Saturday, June 5, 2010

Illustration Friday: Trail

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TRAIL Ride

12 comments:

  1. Very nice your characters.
    is really a very sweet picture!.

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  2. Ah ... you want criticism?
    Well I could put a little more than shadows behind the trees, so the characters come off the bottom

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  3. Roberto, do you mean to make the characters stand out more I should do more with the background, or perhaps make the background darker?
    (I am not terribly happy with this illustration, but my husband convinced me to post it).

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  4. I think they are so sweet!

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  5. ..so cute..you have a nice style..keep it up..

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  6. Hello, Sally, well, thanks for your husband, so we can see your pictures.
    I tried to say that I see three levels.
    one, the street and the riders
    two trees.
    three the forest, the background.
    If you paint the darker the background, highlighting more riders. by contrast, know what I mean?
    Sorry for my opinion.
    Thanks for stopping by my blog.
    hugs

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  7. Thank you everyone!
    And Roberto, THANK YOU! Your opinion is very appreciated, so don't apologize. I am trying to improve here, and when I get the chance, I am going to change the illo according to your criticism, so I can actually see what happens. So once again, thanks!

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  8. This is really sweet! Such charming artwork :)

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  9. Great illustration! They look like they're having fun! Thanks for your lovely comments on my blog.

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  10. Awww, this is adorable! Lots of childplay and whimsy. I love that things are not drawn to scale, and the horses legs make me giggle happily!

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